Dr Jekyll, Mr Hyde
How come so bad and good inside?
Enticed away by fullest flavor
Culinary cuisine, I'd love to savor
But friends say you're no good for me
That we should not keep company
I've tried disguise with herbs so fine
Why must our love be clandestine?
And so in secret I'll conspire
To bite you hard...I'm no vampire!
Posted for Magpie Tales
22 comments:
Clever one, Elaine! I really like the playful rhyming patterns here.
Very neatly done.
Cute! I love the ending.
Laurie K.
Great ending. Enjoyed this.
Truth is, I do my garlic overdose when my husband is away in LA. He hates garlic, especially second hand garlic!
Loved the concept...the Jekyl and Hyde of cuisine. Good job. Vb
Knew a woman that chewed a clove of garlic ALL THE TIME, in fact when she talked, sometimes a little bit would fly out of her mouth.
I loved this - it makes me laugh. Favorite line: "I've tried disguise with herbs so fine/Why must our love be clandestine?" And it's so true. I've just discovered how absolutely delicious garlic is in the last couple of months... but sometimes I have to avoid it! :)
Very clever poem! It is excellent from first line to last.
Ooohhh, this is a clever one..you're too good for him!!
Great rhymes and a clever poem! Some day maybe your love will see the light of day!
What rhyming!
I really like how we get so many ideas out of one photo. Everyone interpreting it differently.
viscous time
LOlss!!
Jekyll n Hyde- haah..
This is so clever Elaine :)
ohhhh I lurrrrrrrrrrrrv garlic :D
Hugs xx
awww - this made me smile...so lovely..
Elaine - this was so cute and funny! Love the monster mash you made with the garlic!
You are so clever indeed Elaine...did I tell you my dear husband is a Canadian...I have a spot set aside in my heart for all of Canada...I could easily live there...bkm
love this! so much fun in the rhyme
Great rhythm to your words .. it was fun to read, loved your Magpie!
lovely and witty.
cool tale,
What a fun take on the photo. Super. (Chew fresh parsley after eating anything with garlic! Also tell hubby it's good for the heart!)
Very amusing Magpie.
Heh heh.....! I loved this one.....
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