I felt a light breeze across a chasm.
A tickle.
It stirred the very core of me
The winds of change brought love, like
A tsunami and washed us ashore
Together
Mellow and aging
I felt a tremor within my chasm
A heartbeat
It moved the very core of me
The winds of change brought life, like
A tsunami and washed us ashore
Together
Parent and child
I felt a tremor within my chasm
A heartbeat
It moved the very core of me
The winds of change brought life, like
A tsunami and washed us ashore
Together
Parent and child
I felt an earthquake across a chasm.
An 8.9
It shook the very core of me
The winds of change brought death, with
A tsunami and washed us ashore
Together
Dead and buried
Posted for Three Word Wednesday prompt "breeze, tickle and mellow"
And for One Shot Wednesday
25 comments:
The finality of the two phrases mingling together, sad on so many levels.
Great words. A subject on so many minds at the moment.
Sheilagh Lee said:The imagery in this is outstanding.It is so sad what is happening in Japan.
ugh...the reality of tragedy...the images are heart breaking...
Powerful words cleverly written ... well done.
Together, in life and death...touching, but tragic, a good dedication to that which is foremost in so many's minds at the moment.
I like your take on the Japan situation
it was worth your words and our read, of such expression nice one
Well crafted powerful poem expressing the current tragedy. Well done.
Sad, yet so relevant.
My hearts felt your words and I'm praying for Japan. Very well written.
Thanks for sharing- Shadiatique
incredible.
really.
witty word play.
Elaine, as always your writing is inspirational. I loved reading this poignant piece.
It is so difficult to contemplate the enormity of the disaster, so it is good to read of another reaction to it.
Sad and share your sentiments. Leaves one with a sinking feeling!!
The reality of the recent tragedy comes through your words.
It takes great craftsmanship to wrap a tragedy up into such a beautifully written poem. One can but admire your skill, and say thanks!
That hit me right in the heart.
Powerful...
Very poignant writing. You've captures the essence of such a great tragedy. It saddens me to know the truth of these words even though they are so beautifully written.
wow! powerful and tender. lovely
Thank you for this well written poem, merging an online game with real life current events.
The Poetry Bin
An online game?
A sensitive handling of an emotional topic. Well done.
aaaww. thanks for the concern. hopefully everything will be fine here soon
arigatou
Emotional and beautifully written.
And thanks so much for participating in my latest Limerick-Off! Mad Kane
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