And the secret is as important - if not more so - than the smile. Great words.
Nice poem. Ah, what is her secret?!
it's all about that secret smile! Nicely written!
One secret that will never be unveild...
Love your gentle rhyme/word scheme ...
And still we seek the secret. Nice work!!
We'll never know the reason for the smile, but you frame the mystery beautifully. Vb
Very well done. Great magpie!
Good to read and even better to listen to.
This is so charming! It's that quirky smile that makes us believe she holds a secret!
I'm still trying to guess the secret! You wrote a marvelous poem with this prompt!
Love this! Oh that secret... if only we knew.~laurie
Delightful! So well done!
I love the scheme you created here, the echoing rhyming and the message. I really enjoyed this.
That's the thing, the secret, what's behind the smile, we are so drawn to things we don't fully understand. Nice take on prompt.
The secret invites an answer untold.... Nicely done.
Nice. But I wonder how much the secret has been enhanced by our appetite for mystery?
A very tight poem.
...the secret does make it such a wonder indeed!:-)
Exemplary, perfect.
Brevity is the soul of wit.
You've captured it. I like the rhythm of this one.
She keeps her thoughts to herself. Well done>
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And the secret is as important - if not more so - than the smile. Great words.
Nice poem. Ah, what is her secret?!
it's all about that secret smile! Nicely written!
One secret that will never be unveild...
Love your gentle rhyme/word scheme ...
And still we seek the secret. Nice work!!
We'll never know the reason for the smile, but you frame the mystery beautifully. Vb
Very well done. Great magpie!
Good to read and even better to listen to.
This is so charming! It's that quirky smile that makes us believe she holds a secret!
I'm still trying to guess the secret! You wrote a marvelous poem with this prompt!
Love this! Oh that secret... if only we knew.
~laurie
Delightful! So well done!
I love the scheme you created here, the echoing rhyming and the message. I really enjoyed this.
That's the thing, the secret, what's behind the smile, we are so drawn to things we don't fully understand. Nice take on prompt.
The secret invites an answer untold.... Nicely done.
Nice. But I wonder how much the secret has been enhanced by our appetite for mystery?
A very tight poem.
...the secret does make it such a wonder indeed!
:-)
Exemplary, perfect.
Brevity is the soul of wit.
You've captured it. I like the rhythm of this one.
She keeps her thoughts to herself. Well done>
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