Monday, April 4, 2011

Inside Out





Wind on glass
Rain on pane
Skies burst
Clouds drain

Head on glass
Rain on pain
Sorrow bursts
Feelings drain


It's a cycle

24 comments:

izzy said...

Cool! love the way you brought this around.
Thanks.

Jinksy said...

Great weather forecast! LOL :)

Elaine said...

Life is often reflected in the weather. Have a good old cry...then it's sunny inside and out!

LKHarris-Kolp said...

Love this... I totally agree, Elaine.

~laurie

anthonynorth said...

Feelings and the weather often coincide. Great words.

honeyhaiku said...

very true!

Fireblossom said...

Very imaginative, lady. :-) Love how you worked the two together as you did.

Brian Miller said...

a good cry is worth it though...nicely played...

Isabel Doyle said...

clever and true

Southwest Arkie said...

Very true...weather plays such a big part in how we feel.

versebender said...

Great job with the sad cycle....but the sun will shine again. really enjoyed. vb

Tumblewords: said...

A delightful piece!

Mad Kane said...

How clever! I really like it!
Mad Kane

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Really like this!

Anna :o]

Lisa said...

Love your take on this post Elaine. Never thought about it as a cycle but yes, that is so true.

Lisa
InspiredbyLisa

Reflections said...

Love this piece... simple yet it conveys so much of the cycle.

Tess Kincaid said...

It is a cycle, this circle of life. Clever one, Elaine!

Helen said...

Delightfully rhymed, nicely expressed.

Trellissimo said...

Elegantly simple. :)

Christine said...

Wonderful pain on pane.

Martin H. said...

A wet spell can be depressing.

Steve Isaak said...

Cuts to it, excellent melding of water/emotion.

Carrie Burtt said...

Elaine this is brilliant and true! :-)

Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

your words sing..
smiles.

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