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How tragic the defense used delusion
Tried to sway the jury by illusion
Evident are the facts
Of these murderous acts
And now GUILTY, the only conclusion
Posted for Three Word Wednesday
Prompt : Evident, Illusiion, Tragic.
Posted for Three Word Wednesday
Prompt : Evident, Illusiion, Tragic.
15 comments:
Important subject nicely executed.
We can only hope that illusion and delusion don't produce collusion.
No chance for an appeal? lol
Love it!
Loved the limerick!
draining
Wonderful limerick and so true.
I just love to read limericks, loved it.
Elaine~
Great limerick... one of my favorites!
~laurie
Hi Elaine. You stopped by my blog and asked me to check out your limerick, voicing concern about your last line not being humorous. While it's preferable to have a funny last line, sometimes you can get away without one if you otherwise tighten up your meter. I hope you don't mind my playing with your meter a bit:
How tragic! Defense used delusion
Hoped the jury would fall for illusion.
But the evident facts
Of these murderous acts
Shouted GUILTY, the only conclusion.
Mad Kane
Wonderful!
I was quite happy with the limerick, not being the guilty party!
I love the verdict. Really a great take.
Lisa
InspiredbyLisa
nice one - limericks are so fun. I always feel like jumping as I read them :)
Well done with the limerick, both you and Mad Kane
Very good take on the prompt.
Jolly good limerick, I enjoyed reading it.
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