Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Guilty (Limerick)




                           
How tragic the defense used delusion
Tried to sway the jury by illusion
Evident are the facts
Of these murderous acts
And now GUILTY, the only conclusion





Posted for Three Word Wednesday
Prompt : Evident, Illusiion, Tragic.

15 comments:

anthonynorth said...

Important subject nicely executed.

Kim Nelson said...

We can only hope that illusion and delusion don't produce collusion.

Ren said...

No chance for an appeal? lol
Love it!

gautami tripathy said...

Loved the limerick!

draining

Fear Not the Darkness but What lies Within said...

Wonderful limerick and so true.

Christine said...

I just love to read limericks, loved it.

LKHarris-Kolp said...

Elaine~

Great limerick... one of my favorites!

~laurie

Mad Kane said...

Hi Elaine. You stopped by my blog and asked me to check out your limerick, voicing concern about your last line not being humorous. While it's preferable to have a funny last line, sometimes you can get away without one if you otherwise tighten up your meter. I hope you don't mind my playing with your meter a bit:

How tragic! Defense used delusion
Hoped the jury would fall for illusion.
But the evident facts
Of these murderous acts
Shouted GUILTY, the only conclusion.

Mad Kane

The Rusty Pen said...

Wonderful!

oldegg said...

I was quite happy with the limerick, not being the guilty party!

Lisa said...

I love the verdict. Really a great take.

Lisa
InspiredbyLisa

Sheila Moore said...

nice one - limericks are so fun. I always feel like jumping as I read them :)

beespoetry said...

Well done with the limerick, both you and Mad Kane

mangetoutetc said...

Very good take on the prompt.

Old Altonian said...

Jolly good limerick, I enjoyed reading it.

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