Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Mosaic of Mercy

These are the moments I relish
When the Omniscient
Sees the pieces of a foolish life
And fashions them
With grace into
A mosaic of mercy





prompt : relish, foolish, mercy

6 comments:

Brian Miller said...

mmm...i love mosaics and this kind all the more...very nice.

Fear Not the Darkness but What lies Within said...

"fashions them into a mosaic of mercy" Lovely simply lovely Elaine

anthonynorth said...

A good way to sort things out. Great words.

oldegg said...

Don't worry about your foolish life, we all have them. We just have to hope he kneads (and needs) us to do something worthwhile, such as your meaningful poem.

Kim Nelson said...

Absolutely fabulous. You took ordinary words and fashioned them into a smart, succinct piece of verse. Well done, Elaine!
Here is my 3WW bit:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/04/27/childhood-folly/

ThomG said...

simply wonderful words here.

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