LOL - this brings back memories :)
Very clever and funny! And expensive now that I'm the parent paying for it!
smiles. nice play on the crooked line...i avoided the ortho! wee...
My poor children have inherited my big teeth and my husbands little mouth. Going to pay for this x2 myself!
Great take on the prompt! :-)
I love when a really good poem can also be cute. Very good work. My daughter also has big teeth (and too many of them) in her little mouth. Luckily I know when she's 5, so I have time to prepare [save] for braces.
A fun ticket you have there! LOL
Crooked to be straight! God I hated braces!!
Nice one Elaine, keep smiling!
Another great interpretation of the prompt-line.
I enjoyed the four identical rhymes - good fun. Welcome aboard the bus!
Your poem made me smile and smile and smile! Actually the first thing that came to my mind when I read Bug's prompt was crooked teeth - mine to be precise. Had braces for three years in my 20s!!!
Hahahaha!!!The comment that crooked lines straighten teeth is a riot! You've done a juicy job here and as you can see, lots of us related! Mine when on in third grade.
Stay on the bus!
Hehehe! I like the way you wrote this. It's definitely catchy. I remember those times when I was struggling to eat with my braces. Oh, my teenage years. =)-Joel Jackson
Haha. I love your writing style. :D " My little pearly whites|All fighting for a space" - This part made me smile. Anyway, almost all teenagers suffer from painful braces. Oh, the memories. O.oBradley Bedell