Screwed me over easy
didn't you?
Behind my back too!
Given enough heat,
I knew you'd show
your true colours.
Beware the dark side.
I doubt there's a crumb
of decency in you.
Broken up about it? Me?
I'm glad you're gone you
Yellow-bellied,
chicken livered jerk!
31 comments:
Well said!
Powerful and excellent words.
Jerk, it's a strong word. I don't like it much, but it does go with chicken, which goes with eggs, which goes with...
Oh so well said! Clever take on the prompt. Thanks for the morning smiles.
This is fantastic! Love the last line, but it is well ended because the body was strong.
wow - will try not to make you angry!
I hope you aren't holding back. It's a good gotcha! You yellow-bellied chicken livered jerk, and you feel better!
This made me laugh! Well done:-)
Ha- that's great... you go, girl!
~laurie
lol, go on girl, let him have it, like egg on your face boi, like the strength in this
Ouchhh!!
Loved it.. mega lolssss
Very well composed metaphorically..
Hugs xx
And all that poem from two little eggs... :)
Yikes! In a clever way!
Well you go girl!
Wow!
and don't come back for lunch
no soup for you ! :)
love it, Elaine
The metaphor on steroids! This was fantastic top to bottom. Clever, clever, clever. A+ Vb
Oh ... I already know, this will be one of my favorites!!!
oh snap, your first line is a fist and the rest the arm...wow...great write..
I love the energy in this one! Love it.
what better way to say it than with eggs!
I like the way that you took literal images from the picture. I mean crumbs from the toast, yellow from the egg. Brilliant take on the photo prompt.
I love how everyone here is suddenly a wee bit terrified of you ;)
Nothing like being done over, easy.
Happy Easter anyway, I ain't scared :)
Great take! I'm smiling as I write.What a wallop in plain English!
That's telling like it is! No doubt left...
Tell it like it is Elaine! Excellent take!
Anna :o]
WoW! You certainly told him! Great take on the prompt.
LOL, fun piece.
These Yellow bellies are the only good kind... :)
eggscellent. (sorry)
Love this! "Screwed me over easy
didn't you?" this line is my favorite! Nice work! :o)
If you are a chicken, is being chicken-livered a good or bad thing? Nice twist on the photo.
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