Friday, April 29, 2011

55 ( minus 1)

i can't pick up wet soap
or fish with one hand
can't count endless stars
or hourglass sand
can't knit without needles
shower without h2o
make tequila without agave
or a snowman without snow
write poems without a muse
or in shallow waters dive
i can write 54
can't write 55

4 comments:

Brian Miller said...

ha a little modern van halen...smiles. well played elaine...

Belinda Munoz said...

A word rebel you are. Nice one.

G-Man said...

Elaine...
You been hitting the Molson Golden?
This could easily have been a 55.
SCAMP!!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Christine said...

Mutiny aside this had fun rhythm.` I'm sure my post is under 55 but I hope no one notices.

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