Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Thinking of Blinking?

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today I think
I 'll stop my blink
for just a short occasion

eyelashes kink
then eyelids sink
some kind of lid invasion

I'm on the brink 
when both eyes linked 
start blink-wink-sync-opation






this poem was submitted for: Three Word Wednesday.









5 comments:

Fear Not the Darkness but What lies Within said...

Sheialgh Lee said: great use of the prompts in your poem

JP/deb said...

nice syncopation & rhythm....

peace,
JP/deborah

rallentanda said...

They look like Liz Hurley's eyes. Eyes wide open rather than blink I would advise if she's hanging out with Shane Warne:)

Susannah said...

This made me smile, :-)

I loved - "start blink-wink-sync-opation"

ThomG said...

this has such a great rhythm to it. Welcome to 3WW.

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