Hidden Heartbeat: Thinking of Blinking?

Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Thinking of Blinking?

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today I think

I 'll stop my blink

for just a short occasion

eyelashes kink

then eyelids sink

some kind of lid invasion

I'm on the brink

when both eyes linked

start blink-wink-sync-opation

this poem was submitted for: Three Word Wednesday.

5 comments:

Sheilagh Lee said...: Sheialgh Lee said: great use of the prompts in your poem; February 16, 2011 at 1:55 PM
JP/deb said...: nice syncopation & rhythm....

peace,
JP/deborah; February 16, 2011 at 10:03 PM
rallentanda said...: They look like Liz Hurley's eyes. Eyes wide open rather than blink I would advise if she's hanging out with Shane Warne:); February 17, 2011 at 12:15 AM
Susannah said...: This made me smile, :-)

I loved - "start blink-wink-sync-opation"; February 17, 2011 at 1:17 AM
Thom Gabrukiewicz said...: this has such a great rhythm to it. Welcome to 3WW.; February 22, 2011 at 7:54 AM

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