Wednesday, May 25, 2011

55 Wet and Dry

still hot and slightly damp
she walked naked across
the cool porcelain tile
opening the door, the
clothes now lay piled in a
scattered jumble on the floor
she smiled, a huge grin 
anticipating the thrill of
what was to come next...
'cause nothing beats a
steamy shower and clean
laundry straight from the dryer



Posted for Three Word Wednesday (prompt: grin, jumble, naked )
And for 55 Flash Fiction

12 comments:

anthonynorth said...

Great multi-tasking there. Nice one.

honeyhaiku said...

So true. Love this piece!

Fear Not the Darkness but What lies Within said...

oh you fooled us there "steamy shower and laundry straight from the dryer"
Wonderful poem Elaine

Christine said...

nice one, do enjoy a steamy lead up.

G-Man said...

Yeah...
Nothing like it!
Great Job Birthday Girl!
You Rock The Provence!
I just LOVE a steamy 55.
Thanks for making our temperatures rise, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Brian Miller said...

haha....nicely played...great build up the Wisk-ed away on the Tide

Pheromone Girl said...

Happiest birthday!

Love that story with a twist...

moondustwriter said...

well...

Happy Birthday sweetie
enjoy!!!!

Monkey Man said...

Ain't that the truth....warm fresh smelling clothes straight from the dryer. Yup.

Happy b-day.

Alice Audrey said...

LOL. You got me. Or should I say you had me going? Great use of the three words.

Please come check out my three words.

Jingle said...

Happy Birthday.

a hot 55, well cooked.

mindlovemisery said...

You had me too lol Great job there's something naughty about this poem :-P

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