Tuesday, July 19, 2011

black sheep white lie













you're a black sheep
tellin' a white lie
bleachin' your wool
tryin' to get by
a blanket of snow
to go with the flow
but inside the flock
you pull away
cause it's knitted
in your DNA
you're a black sheep
have you forgotten
you'll never be
100% cotton
so break the mold
free the fold
'cause deep inside
the others wish
they were more
like you and 
a lot less
sheepish

13 comments:

Libby said...

Hi Elaine, love this poem, love the rhythm and the meaning, Libby @Libbypoetry

Brian Miller said...

smiles. yes at times...nice flow to this...

Anonymous said...

BEAUTIFUL!!! The rhythm the meaning you have captured something really amazing in this poem if only we all could be our true selves!

The Poet said...

Great way to put the message across, Elaine.

Nice to see you for dVerse's opening!

Sheila said...

oh, this is very entertaining. I love it.

Maude Lynn said...

Great rhythm and flow to this!

Bubba said...

Delightfully whimsical, Elaine!

Unknown said...

Gives me a little bit of appreciation for all the members of the fold, Elaine.

RJ Clarken said...

Elaine - wow. Just. Wow. This poem gives me something to think about today.

Brenna said...

Checking to see if this works...

Brenna said...

Yay!!! Thank-you Elaine!!! :) :) :) As Imentioned earlier...I really like this!

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

Very clever and entertaining poem!

Mad Kane

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

I just re-read it. It still makes me laugh.

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