like the red sock that inadvertently
ends up in
the white laundry
you slipped unnoticed
into the centre of my
plain vanilla white world
you were striking and colourful
boldly stepping into
boldly stepping into
the unguarded door
of my heart.
you invited me to dance
a slow twisted tango
and i blushed subtle shades
of scarlett at the heat
of your touch.
gyrating, rotating
to the beat of a spinning drum
bleeding all over
me, 'til
i was bled dry
bleeding all over
me, 'til
i was bled dry
love cooled, 'cause you changed
the choreography
the choreography
then tossed me aside
leaving me with only warm memories
and a crimson stain
it's a cycle i will repeat
fully aware that
this isn't normal. i believe normal
is just a setting on
is just a setting on
the tumble dryer
Posted for One Shot Wednesday
19 comments:
nice...the sock in the whites permeating everything is a great metaphor for a relationship...cold end though in the tossing...nice write.
Yep...
Some personalities are so strong, they simply take over everything...
Oh, this is really nice. That red sock works it's way in both good and bad ways :)
so creative Elaine...I love this!
Nice creative expression. Enjoyed your piece.
I really like your use of metaphor here. yes, I've been put through the rinse cycle a few times back in my dating days!
PS. when you go to comment, be sure NOT to check the "stay signed in" box. I've read where other bloggers have said that will make it so you can leave a comment. Hope that helps!
nice way to say that he took over your entire world.that sock is a strong analogy.great write!been there a few times.honestly,as a man,that line would've been slow coming to me.
Really clever...especially the last stanza.
how darn clever of you.. colors..ha, i have read this twice and just think how clever ..somethings are so powerful (or we allow them to be)they overshadow things..well done
Some lessons hurt to learn.
The sock monster does more than eat socks, it would appear.
A spiffy and clever write, Elaine...
mark
http://radio-nowhere.org/nb/
Yeah some take over leaving the others just all to gather and either follow or leave, great use of imagery too.
i love your artful and creative touch here...
One of your best, Elaine! Terrific play with red. Bravo!
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/14/letting-go/
Love it. Could be my favorite of yours.
Mad Kane
Creative and clever.
Brilliant, blogpal!
Great imagery Elaine.
I like your creativity!
Here's mine:
http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/01/introduce-me-to-your-emotions.html
Wow! I absolutely love this! So appreciate your writing style. We write similarly. Looking forward to reading more.
A new follower,
Jen
http://richfaithrising.blogspot.com/
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